Production: Analysis of one sequence that we intend to change

After we received the feedback for our rough cut video we as a group decide to change several aspects of it in order to improve it. The main shot we decided to change was the extreme closeup base track of her lips which was meant to show her emphasise her emotions in which we have seen it done before in several music video examples in the past, but because of the shot being out of focus and the shot not reflecting the genre and the mood of the song, we had to change it.